ext_54788 ([identity profile] fightingthecage.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] knights_say_nih 2006-02-11 11:23 pm (UTC)

You did it, YAY! They're brilliant! :D

Collar
My hand brushes against his neck as I straighten his collar and he smiles at me as he reaches to adjust my tie.


I love this. Quiet intimacy and the sort of gesture that comes from being with someone for ages.

Wild
His teeth bite just a small touch too hard, my skin breaks, and I scream for the pleasure of knowing I’ve stolen his control yet again


GUUUUUUUHHH!!

Finale
His chest rises, and falls, and I rest my head on it, and it rises, and his hand comes up, trembling, to wrap through my hair, and falls, and I smile and say ‘I love you’ and it doesn’t rise again.


Just made me cry. Ack.

Hee though! Fabulous - I seriously love them all. Now of course, I'm writing for Random, as Ramon. Heh!

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