Great job so far! I hated V for Vandetta, and originally did not want to read this crossover. But eventually I ran out of things to read, and now I can only say "wow." Thank you thank you thank you for keeping it real. No hug-happy Light or cliche sex addict Mello, just the characters in their awkward glory.
The only thing I wish is that you'd let Light x L or L x Light creep in.
From the way L thinks back to the Kira case, as the pinnacle of his career, it just makes me wish there was more to it!
Maybe a repressed love/affection?